Thanks so much for this - I did leave a comment on Loom, not sure whether you got it, this is all new to me!
Anyway, your feedback is brilliant, love your enegy! Brilliant! I have started working on it and making some changes, I'll continue to do so over the coming days and it would be great to revisit it with you and set a call up with you both.
Emma Johnson
Thank you for the LOOM video. Lots of quick to implement suggestions to improve readability and impact.
As requested - I like the pacing, and the simplicity of your recommendations and context. I liked the digestible nature. EBI - even better if- I get your whole face before the main walk through, and the video didn't start on 1.2x speed, or at least it did on my side.
Patrick
Really appreciate your analysis and enthusiasm.
Brilliant! Excellent assessment and recommendations. I will work with Cody this week, and we will adopt each of your recommendations and have a new pitch deck by the end of the week.
As I always say to the Team - You only have one chance to make a great impression.
Patrick
"a ton of value with this review Patrick. Love it!
Lan
This is EXCELLENT! Thank you, again, for all your help. We're in process of making many of the changes you outlined. Would love your overarching feedback when it's finished. In the meantime, working on the official engagement.
Brian Mupo
Patrick - thank you for taking the time to review my deck. I appreciate your enthusiasm for the business/category/product along with the fact that your recommendations were straightforward and focused, especially as it relates to the "what we're raising" slide and use of capital.
Michael Dub
I loved your insightful feedback, especially regarding the time investors allocate to openings and pitch deck reviews. We're aligning our pitch deck with the website.
On the team slide, feedback varies, but we value all perspectives and are working on enhancements.
Thank you once again for taking the time to share your thoughts. Your input is instrumental in refining our approach, and we look forward to continued collaboration.
Shravan
Great recommendations for enhancing the CanceRx pitch deck.
How quickly can we implement? I am available after 3:00 today to assist.