Patrick and Cody,
Great recommendations for enhancing the CanceRx pitch deck.
How quickly can we implement? I am available after 3:00 today to assist.
On the team slide, feedback varies, but we value all perspectives and are working on enhancements.
Thank you once again for taking the time to share your thoughts. Your input is instrumental in refining our approach, and we look forward to continued collaboration.
As requested - I like the pacing, and the simplicity of your recommendations and context. I liked the digestible nature. EBI - even better if - I get your whole face before the main walk through, and the video didn't start on 1.2x speed, or at least it did on my side.
I will give your deck a detailed review. At first glance I have to say the following...
Thanks for sharing. Please give me some time to review this and get back to you.
Again, welcome to ThinkFish.
What did I like about the review?
That you liked the deck, and your comments were refinements not reworks.
What didn't I like about the review?
You did write a check (no real comments).
That said, I've made some major tone changes in the early slides - one confusion that a few people had is that they thought Gallerie deals with NFTS, and not traditional art. With that in mind, we've changed slide 2 (Opportunity), and also the Ask.
Would be really grateful to get your thoughts on the updated storyline, or if you think this is too aggressive. Many thanks!
Patrick - thank you for taking the time to review my deck. I appreciate your enthusiasm for the business/category/product along with the fact that your recommendations were straightforward and focused, especially as it relates to the "what we're raising" slide and use of capital.
This is EXCELLENT! Thank you, again, for all your help. We're in process of making many of the changes you outlined. Would love your overarching feedback when it's finished. In the meantime, working on the official engagement.
Brilliant! Excellent assessment and recommendations. I will work with Cody this week, and we will adopt each of your recommendations and have a new pitch deck by the end of the week.
As I always say to the Team - You only have one chance to make a great impression.
As requested - I like the pacing, and the simplicity of your recommendations and context. I liked the digestible nature. EBI - even better if- I get your whole face before the main walk through, and the video didn't start on 1.2x speed, or at least it did on my side.
Anyway, your feedback is brilliant, love your enegy! Brilliant! I have started working on it and making some changes, I'll continue to do so over the coming days and it would be great to revisit it with you and set a call up with you both.