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BEN PADNOS
Patrick and Cody,
Patrick and Cody,
Great recommendations for enhancing the CanceRx pitch deck.
How quickly can we implement? I am available after 3:00 today to assist.
Timothy Gibbons
I loved your insightful feedback, especially regarding the time investors allocate to openings and pitch deck reviews. We're aligning our pitch deck with the website.
On the team slide, feedback varies, but we value all perspectives and are working on enhancements.
Thank you once again for taking the time to share your thoughts. Your input is instrumental in refining our approach, and we look forward to continued collaboration.
Shravan Talupula
Thank you for the LOOM video. Lots of quick to implement suggestions to improve readability and impact.
As requested - I like the pacing, and the simplicity of your recommendations and context. I liked the digestible nature. EBI - even better if - I get your whole face before the main walk through, and the video didn't start on 1.2x speed, or at least it did on my side.
Adam Boggs
Cindy, welcome to ThinkFISH. Excited to have you on board.
I will give your deck a detailed review. At first glance I have to say the following...
- I love the opening slide. I think we can punch it up a bit to get investors to open.
- I like 14 slides total./. Well done.
- There is lots of data to work with. That's great and with some simplified style we can help you nail the investor presentations.
Thanks for sharing. Please give me some time to review this and get back to you.
Again, welcome to ThinkFish.
Cindy McReyolds
Thanks for the feedback Patrick. Really appreciate it!
Lan Block
Thanks again for your time, comments and appreciate the feedback.
What did I like about the review?
That you liked the deck, and your comments were refinements not reworks.
What didn't I like about the review?
You did write a check (no real comments).
Chuck
First, many thanks for such a wonderful and thorough review. I've made some changes (minus the headshots- we only have artist headshots, not the art investors"). Still in the process of changing the last slide.
That said, I've made some major tone changes in the early slides - one confusion that a few people had is that they thought Gallerie deals with NFTS, and not traditional art. With that in mind, we've changed slide 2 (Opportunity), and also the Ask.
Would be really grateful to get your thoughts on the updated storyline, or if you think this is too aggressive. Many thanks!
Devang Bhat
Patrick - thank you for taking the time to review my deck. I appreciate your enthusiasm for the business/category/product along with the fact that your recommendations were straightforward and focused, especially as it relates to the "what we're raising" slide and use of capital.
Michael Dub
This is EXCELLENT! Thank you, again, for all your help. We're in process of making many of the changes you outlined. Would love your overarching feedback when it's finished. In the meantime, working on the official engagement.
Brian Mupo
Really appreciate your analysis and enthusiasm.
Brilliant! Excellent assessment and recommendations. I will work with Cody this week, and we will adopt each of your recommendations and have a new pitch deck by the end of the week.
As I always say to the Team - You only have one chance to make a great impression.
Clifford Gibbons
Thank you for the LOOM video. Lots of quick to implement suggestions to improve readability and impact.
As requested - I like the pacing, and the simplicity of your recommendations and context. I liked the digestible nature. EBI - even better if- I get your whole face before the main walk through, and the video didn't start on 1.2x speed, or at least it did on my side.
Adam Boggs
a ton of value with this review Patrick. Love it!
Thanks so much for this - I did leave a comment on Loom, not sure whether you got it, this is all new to me!
Anyway, your feedback is brilliant, love your enegy! Brilliant! I have started working on it and making some changes, I'll continue to do so over the coming days and it would be great to revisit it with you and set a call up with you both.